tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8985990633590684254.post6343233829726256208..comments2023-10-17T05:32:54.599-04:00Comments on Adesola's BA PP blog: FeedbackAdesolahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01097159672366205738noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8985990633590684254.post-47388906586258614692013-12-30T06:18:27.637-05:002013-12-30T06:18:27.637-05:00I think when I was trying to write what I thought ...I think when I was trying to write what I thought people wanted to read, I was actually writing rubbish, and then since then, so for module two and hopefully module three where I've been writing about reality and what really been going on and what I think about it all, it seems to be working out a lot better. Its just about remembering that, so its such a relevant post! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501885191312637914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8985990633590684254.post-18853140423097182162013-12-24T16:51:06.014-05:002013-12-24T16:51:06.014-05:00What you say about honesty and just telling the st...What you say about honesty and just telling the story really resonates with me. It takes time to find your voice rather than the voice of the person you think someone studying 'should' have.<br />Adesola<br /><br />Adesolahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01097159672366205738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8985990633590684254.post-89397284114462076512013-12-24T16:28:57.988-05:002013-12-24T16:28:57.988-05:00Adesola,
Great post.
I think it's hard to know...Adesola,<br />Great post.<br />I think it's hard to know when you should 'stick to your guns' about something that you personally feel is important and when to make changes to create a more academically acceptable or presentable assignment.<br /><br />Paula is my tutor and she has been so helpful with what you describe as the 'academic conventions' - my citations skills were sorely lacking in Module 2 so I have asked her many questions so as to get it right - not for the sake of it but from my desire to develop my skills.<br /><br />Her discussions with me about flow, order and presentation have also given me opportunity to organise my thoughts in a more accessible and logical way, yet they are still my thoughts. <br /><br />I blogged a little while ago about a little talk I had with myself about how I should stop trying to be clever and just tell my story. In trying to 'impress' I was in danger of losing the honesty and ethos of my inquiry. In taking that advice seriously I feel I have now spoken from the heart in my report (with my head to guide me, obviously!) and finally found my voice! <br /><br />Wishing you a happy Christmas.<br />SAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13764263375698226371noreply@blogger.com